((I need help on how I could RP Scarlet better, what I should STOP doing, and what I should be doing more of...)

"...I wonder what happened to my parents" Said Scarlet, who was curled up by a street light. "...Did they abandon me? Or did they die..." She said, looking away. "I want to know..." Growing sad, she looked at the moon. "Maybe some of the people I've met could help me..." Rising up, she turned around. "I guess I'll just have to go out and see for myself..." She moved forward, determined to find out to what had happened to her mother and father